Re: Kokoro Script: FINAL

ウサギ Thu Jul 14, 2011 4:33 pm

ahh let me make one thing clear, the chorus with just our Rin and Len

Rin is singing the original Kokoro chorus while Len is singing the Kiseki chorus so it'll be like...

Len:
"Sono hitomi no naka utsuru boku wa
Kimi ni totte donna sonzai?"
Kare ni totte jikan wa mugen ja nai
Demo KANOJO ni wa mada wakaranai

Rin:
ima ugoki hajimeta kasoku suru kiseki
nazeka namida ga tomaranai...
naze watashi furueru? kasoku suru kodou
kore ga watashi no nozonda "kokoro"?

XAerifyX Thu Jul 14, 2011 7:38 pm

ウサギ wrote:ahh let me make one thing clear, the chorus with just our Rin and Len

Rin is singing the original Kokoro chorus while Len is singing the Kiseki chorus so it'll be like...

Len:
"Sono hitomi no naka utsuru boku wa
Kimi ni totte donna sonzai?"
Kare ni totte jikan wa mugen ja nai
Demo KANOJO ni wa mada wakaranai

Rin:
ima ugoki hajimeta kasoku suru kiseki
nazeka namida ga tomaranai...
naze watashi furueru? kasoku suru kodou
kore ga watashi no nozonda "kokoro"?

I like your script, its much more organised then mine was Smile

But, towards the bottom, I don't see any more numbers, so is it going according to the colours there?

NacchanSakura Thu Jul 14, 2011 8:08 pm

whoa, this script is good Very Happy

I'll send my lines tomorrow.. If I can finish it today then I'll send it today XDD

ウサギ Thu Jul 14, 2011 9:38 pm

XAerifyX wrote:
ウサギ wrote:ahh let me make one thing clear, the chorus with just our Rin and Len

Rin is singing the original Kokoro chorus while Len is singing the Kiseki chorus so it'll be like...

Len:
"Sono hitomi no naka utsuru boku wa
Kimi ni totte donna sonzai?"
Kare ni totte jikan wa mugen ja nai
Demo KANOJO ni wa mada wakaranai

Rin:
ima ugoki hajimeta kasoku suru kiseki
nazeka namida ga tomaranai...
naze watashi furueru? kasoku suru kodou
kore ga watashi no nozonda "kokoro"?

I like your script, its much more organised then mine was But, towards the bottom, I don't see any more numbers, so is it going according to the colours there?

yes it goes by the colors so that means like that specific group sings it.

so when it goes Fushigi Kokoro Kokoro Fushigi one group will start with Fushigi then the next will say Kokoro and it'll flip flop between the two etc.

XAerifyX Thu Jul 14, 2011 9:40 pm

Ah, i see. Very Happy

Very organised, thank you so much Very Happy

ウサギ Thu Jul 14, 2011 9:53 pm

mhm no problem at all :3

AKaNe Thu Jul 14, 2011 11:37 pm

XAerifyX wrote:
AKaNe wrote:Yeah! This script is awsome! >W<

Oh, and by the way....are there still some spaces for the monologue part?
I want to do one of them, can I? 0w0

Lol! Yes, there is! I know it says final, but its under development. Which part did you have in mind?

Actually, I think I want to do one too... o.o

Hmmm.....would you mind if I do the yellow part? Very Happy

imaugokihajimeta Sonohitomi no naka
kasokusurukiseki utsurubokuwa
nazekanamidaga Kiminitotte donna
tomaranai... sonzai?
nazewatashifurueru? Karenitottejikanwa
kasokusurukodou mugenjanai
koregawatashi no Demo KANOKO niwamada
nozonda "kokoro"?(9) wakaranai?(11)

puroguramusaretatooriniutauwatashi...
sore woegao de mitsumeteitahakase...
doushitehakasegasonnayasashii me de
watashiwomirunoka
anotoki no watashiniwawakarimasendeshita...

ウサギ Thu Jul 14, 2011 11:55 pm

AKaNe wrote:
XAerifyX wrote:
AKaNe wrote:Yeah! This script is awsome! >W<

Oh, and by the way....are there still some spaces for the monologue part?
I want to do one of them, can I? 0w0

Lol! Yes, there is! I know it says final, but its under development. Which part did you have in mind?

Actually, I think I want to do one too... o.o

Hmmm.....would you mind if I do the yellow part?

imaugokihajimeta Sonohitomi no naka
kasokusurukiseki utsurubokuwa
nazekanamidaga Kiminitotte donna
tomaranai... sonzai?
nazewatashifurueru? Karenitottejikanwa
kasokusurukodou mugenjanai
koregawatashi no Demo KANOKO niwamada
nozonda "kokoro"?(9) wakaranai?(11)

puroguramusaretatooriniutauwatashi...
sore woegao de mitsumeteitahakase...
doushitehakasegasonnayasashii me de
watashiwomirunoka
anotoki no watashiniwawakarimasendeshita...

ano the part where it says 11 afterward that's specifically for Len because of the Kiseki chorus...but the part after that where it says puroguramu sareta tooriniu...etc.etc. you can totally do ;w;

A-yk-A Fri Jul 15, 2011 12:37 am

ウサギ wrote:
AKaNe wrote:
XAerifyX wrote:
AKaNe wrote:Yeah! This script is awsome! >W<

Oh, and by the way....are there still some spaces for the monologue part?
I want to do one of them, can I? 0w0

Lol! Yes, there is! I know it says final, but its under development. Which part did you have in mind?

Actually, I think I want to do one too... o.o

Hmmm.....would you mind if I do the yellow part?

imaugokihajimeta Sonohitomi no naka
kasokusurukiseki utsurubokuwa
nazekanamidaga Kiminitotte donna
tomaranai... sonzai?
nazewatashifurueru? Karenitottejikanwa
kasokusurukodou mugenjanai
koregawatashi no Demo KANOKO niwamada
nozonda "kokoro"?(9) wakaranai?(11)

puroguramusaretatooriniutauwatashi...
sore woegao de mitsumeteitahakase...
doushitehakasegasonnayasashii me de
watashiwomirunoka
anotoki no watashiniwawakarimasendeshita...

ano the part where it says 11 afterward that's specifically for Len because of the Kiseki chorus...but the part after that where it says puroguramu sareta tooriniu...etc.etc. you can totally do ;w;

uhmm,, ahh,,
well uhmm..

it says it can be done by people who wants to do it..
well i wanna do it!! ^w^
and if you think i sounded right to it..
i think i'm gonna do it.. ^^ (the highlighted part)

"saa, me wo akete goran."
"ohayou."
"ohayou gozaimasu."
"watashi no koto ga wakaru kai?"
"watashi no sekkeisha desu."
"shisutemu ni ijou wa nai you dane."
"mondai arimasen."
"saa, itte goran. omae no namae wo..."(should really be two people only whoever can say these lines right.)

"kono shisutemu wo ugokashite wa ikenai yo."
"omae ni kore wa omosugiru kara..."
I haven' decided, but I think this should be done by all the boys only, Or whoever wants to do it :3

ウサギ Fri Jul 15, 2011 12:41 am

I think she meant the yellow part afterwards....the part before is yellow to differentiate the Kokoro chorus and the Kiseki chorus x.x;

A-yk-A Fri Jul 15, 2011 12:53 am

ウサギ wrote:I think she meant the yellow part afterwards....the part before is yellow to differentiate the Kokoro chorus and the Kiseki chorus x.x;

??__??

well i meant if i can do the doctor's part..
is it ok..?

ウサギ Fri Jul 15, 2011 10:33 am

yeah that's fine o: this script colors in this are confusing xD;;; maybe we should just leave the quote parts in black or something.

XAerifyX Fri Jul 15, 2011 3:57 pm

ウサギ wrote:yeah that's fine o: this script colors in this are confusing xD;;; maybe we should just leave the quote parts in black or something.

Yeah, that might help a little bit.. I wanted to do the dialog too, but, I'm not sure I'll be able to. Razz

If there are still any spots open for the dialog, then I'll take whatever is left.

AKaNe Fri Jul 15, 2011 10:24 pm

Hmm....then can I take the pink part?

imaugokihajimeta Sonohitomi no naka
kasokusurukiseki utsurubokuwa
nazekanamidaga Kiminitotte donna
tomaranai... sonzai?
nazewatashifurueru? Karenitottejikanwa
kasokusurukodou mugenjanai
koregawatashi no Demo KANOKO niwamada
nozonda "kokoro"?(9) wakaranai?(11)

puroguramusaretatooriniutauwatashi...
sore woegao de mitsumeteitahakase...
doushitehakasegasonnayasashii me de
watashiwomirunoka
anotoki no watashiniwawakarimasendeshita...

ウサギ Fri Jul 15, 2011 10:55 pm

AKaNe wrote:Hmm....then can I take the pink part?

imaugokihajimeta Sonohitomi no naka
kasokusurukiseki utsurubokuwa
nazekanamidaga Kiminitotte donna
tomaranai... sonzai?
nazewatashifurueru? Karenitottejikanwa
kasokusurukodou mugenjanai
koregawatashi no Demo KANOKO niwamada
nozonda "kokoro"?(9) wakaranai?(11)

puroguramusaretatooriniutauwatashi...
sore woegao de mitsumeteitahakase...
doushitehakasegasonnayasashii me de
watashiwomirunoka
anotoki no watashiniwawakarimasendeshita...

by all means if you can do the dialogue go ahead, but I think its really up to our initial scripter :3

NacchanSakura Sat Jul 16, 2011 5:16 am

uhm, I'm already finised my lines... so.... to who I must give it? *screw the grammar

**KonekoRomance** Sat Jul 16, 2011 3:58 pm

So, I have my part recorded. who do I email it to?

DeeDee Sat Jul 16, 2011 7:00 pm

Email it to:

divadubs@gmail.com

^.^

XAerifyX Sun Jul 17, 2011 12:34 am

ウサギ wrote:
AKaNe wrote:Hmm....then can I take the pink part?

imaugokihajimeta Sonohitomi no naka
kasokusurukiseki utsurubokuwa
nazekanamidaga Kiminitotte donna
tomaranai... sonzai?
nazewatashifurueru? Karenitottejikanwa
kasokusurukodou mugenjanai
koregawatashi no Demo KANOKO niwamada
nozonda "kokoro"?(9) wakaranai?(11)

puroguramusaretatooriniutauwatashi...
sore woegao de mitsumeteitahakase...
doushitehakasegasonnayasashii me de
watashiwomirunoka
anotoki no watashiniwawakarimasendeshita...
by all means if you can do the dialogue go ahead, but I think its really up to our initial scripter :3

o.o would that be me?

XAerifyX Sun Jul 17, 2011 12:37 am

DeeDee wrote:Email it to:

divadubs@gmail.com

^.^

Teto-san said that the due date was August 2nd, but if we all send it our parts waay before that date, will that mean that this will be up on youtube before then?

AKaNe Sun Jul 17, 2011 1:41 am

Ok, I've finished mine too!
And I've already send it to Deedee.
Thanks!

puroguramusaretatooriniutauwatashi...
sore woegao de mitsumeteitahakase...
doushitehakasegasonnayasashii me de
watashiwomirunoka
anotoki no watashiniwawakarimasendeshita...

yeah....so I just wanted to inform the script writter. thanks! Smile

NacchanSakura Mon Jul 18, 2011 5:53 am

DeeDee wrote:Email it to:

divadubs@gmail.com

^.^

E-mail sent /o/

DeeDee Mon Jul 18, 2011 5:13 pm

XAerifyX wrote:
DeeDee wrote:Email it to:

divadubs@gmail.com

^.^

Teto-san said that the due date was August 2nd, but if we all send it our parts waay before that date, will that mean that this will be up on youtube before then?

I'm guessing (If you were referring to me to answer, if not, Ignore me) probably. If everyone sends in their lines, and I finish the mixing super early. I have about 55% of the mixing done. I think it's up to Teto, though, You know, if she wants to go with the same date.

XAerifyX Mon Jul 18, 2011 5:16 pm

DeeDee wrote:
XAerifyX wrote:
DeeDee wrote:Email it to:

divadubs@gmail.com

^.^

Teto-san said that the due date was August 2nd, but if we all send it our parts waay before that date, will that mean that this will be up on youtube before then?

I'm guessing (If you were referring to me to answer, if not, Ignore me) probably. If everyone sends in their lines, and I finish the mixing super early. I have about 55% of the mixing done. I think it's up to Teto, though, You know, if she wants to go with the same date.

Whoa, 55%? That means your half way done? o.o I see, I'm just looking forward to the video :3 I can't wait to see it :3

DeeDee Mon Jul 18, 2011 5:23 pm

XAerifyX wrote:
DeeDee wrote:
XAerifyX wrote:
DeeDee wrote:Email it to:

divadubs@gmail.com

^.^

Teto-san said that the due date was August 2nd, but if we all send it our parts waay before that date, will that mean that this will be up on youtube before then?

I'm guessing (If you were referring to me to answer, if not, Ignore me) probably. If everyone sends in their lines, and I finish the mixing super early. I have about 55% of the mixing done. I think it's up to Teto, though, You know, if she wants to go with the same date.

Whoa, 55%? That means your half way done? o.o I see, I'm just looking forward to the video :3 I can't wait to see it :3

Lol. I would have more done, but Adobe and stuff 'kept crashing, There's only a couple more people that need to turn in their part. Soooo, It might actually get done early. The mixing, That is. xD

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